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PostSubject: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:52 am

Vizard Information

Name:Takazashi Harakiri
Age:312
Gender:Male
Ex-Squad:12
Ex-Rank:Vice-captain
Looks:
Spoiler:
 

Height 6'0'' Weight 152 lbs Muscle percentage 43%

A tall, dark man who appears threatening, but is actually not. He has longish black hair, and is slightly muscular, but not immensely.

Ability Information

Name:Mini-Garganta
Type:Hollow/kido
Range:5 m
Description:Takazashi can create a small garganta that can fit one person. This serves as a passage between the human world to Hueco Mundo, and vice versa.

Name:Reiatsu Domination
Type:-
Range: 5 m
Description:
Can completely control the mind of any npc human with a reiatsu stat of 55 or less within the 5m range who is not spiritually awakened. This works, because, through the oppression of the victim's reiatsu, the user is able to manipulate his mind by poking his subconscious repeatedly.

Zanpakuto Information

Name:Raiden
Type:Lightning
Appearance:Yellow ninjato
Spirit Manifestation: Raiden from MK
Spirit World:A barren world riddled with lightning
Spirit Personality:Hot-tempered, difficult to please.


Shikai Information

Name:Raiden
Release Phrase:"Arise from the earth and ascend to the heavens, god of lightning!"
Appearance:Sasuke's chidori sword except a lot more lightning

Shikai Ability Information

Name:Kaminari no nami
Type:Lightning
Range:75 m
Description:A large wave of crackling lightning that is around 7.5 meters high. When it hits a much stronger opponent, it damages them but won't kill them. Anyone equal will suffer heavy damage and severe burns. Anyone weaker takes critical and potentially fatal damage. The wave is at full strength and constant size until 75 meters, at which it will fizzle out instantly. All lightning moves from Shikai are as fast as its user. 1 post cooldown.

Name:Kaminari no kēji
Type:Lightning
Range:15 m
Description:Fires a projectile that travels at the users speed and is the size of a football. If it hits,it forms a stationary cage of lightning that can surround one person. Can only have one at a time. The person of equal power would take severe burns and damage by moving through the cage. The size of the cage changes with the victim's size. 2 post cooldown and 2 post duration. Forms spontaneously around the victim. More and less powerful: see Kaminari no nami

Name:Inazuma no seigyo
Type:Lightning
Range:attack range 50 m
Description:Raiden grants the user generation and complete manipulation of lightning. The user's lightning can harm himself if left unguided, and cannot be concentrated to the point where it would split atoms.

Bankai Information

Name:Iki hibana no chōken (longsword of the living spark)
Appearance: Shimmering sword, not nearly as much lightning

Bankai Ability Information

Name:Iki hibana no chōken: Ascend
Type:Lightning
Range:50 m
Description:Similar to Kaminari no Nami, except stronger and with a shorter range. Same cooldown as Kaminari no Nami. All Bankai moves move at 1.5x the user's speed.

Name:Iki hibana no chōken: Descend
Type:Lightning
Range:Self, 1 meter radius
Description:The user surrounds himself with lightning that does not touch/affect him. This serves as a shield to keep out probing attackers. Duration: 5 posts Cooldown: 3 posts Damage: See Kaminari no Nami

Name:Iki hibana no chōken: Transcend
Type:Lightning, passive
Range:sword
Description:The sword appears to erase all solid matter it touches. It de-condenses the matter into its pure energy form and dissipates it, which results in the shimmering of the bankai.

Name:Iki hibana no chōken: Rescind
Type:Lightning
Range:100 m
Description:Using energy stored in the blade, the bankai can fire one, small lightning shot at an opponent. Upon contact, not only will the projectile puncture completely through the body of the opponent if he is equal or weaker strength, but also disrupt his nervous system, also paralyzing him and deactivating his 5 senses for 4 posts. As another function, this shot can also disrupt and dissipate kido and cero/bala attacks and barriers created by those with a lower reishi stat than the user. The shot cannot paralyze stronger foes. Cooldown of 2 posts

Mask & Hollow Information

Name:Takazashi's Hollow Mask (duh)
Mask Appearance:Shikki Fuujin mask
Inner Hollow Appearance: Alucard with his glowing glasses and a hole in his chest lol

Inner Hollow World:A drowned version of my inner world with seaweed
Mask Based Ability Information

Name:Soul Consumption
Type:Hollow
Range:5 m
Description:With his hollow mask on, Takazashi can consume the soul of any unconscious or sleeping being withing 5 meters. This process lets him examine the memories of the victim. Because a sleeping victim leaves his/her subconscious (and thus, his/her ambient reiatsu) unguarded, Takazashi can easily consume it. This is similar to Gonzui.

Name:Hollow Domination
Type:Hollow
Range:10 m
Description:Takazashi may control the mind of any hollow that is not an arrancar. The range of control is 10 m. Description: see Reiatsu Domination above

Name: Cero
Type: -
Range: Dependant on Reiatsu levels
Description: This is a highly powerful and relatively swift energy blast which can be fired from various body parts, such as the mouth, tongue, hand, or fingers. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Visored have used Cero attacks, and it appears stronger entities can use it more efficiently and forcefully. With the exception of a few Cero techniques and users, Cero requires some time to be used effectively, so the enemy must be not moving, busy with something else, or too badly wounded to even simply dodge it. There exist a number of variations of Cero, which are usually unique to the Arrancar using it.

Name: High-speed regeneration
Type: -
Range: Self
Description: This is a highly powerful and relatively swift tissue and bone regeneration that heals attacks except for internal organ damage.
Minor wounds (small cuts, bruises) heal instantly.
Medium sized cuts (Being sliced across the chest) will also heal instantly
Loss of a limb takes a full post



Extra Information

Family:None whatsoever
Personality: His personality is generally defined by his reactions, which are the main ways to define what kind a person he is. There is pretty much no way to fathom his personality unless you somehow stimulate him to produce a reaction. Even then, its very hard to get him to do so, unless you do something outright stupid, impetuous or otherwise bold or brash. Anyways, as I said before, his personality with respect to others is defined by his reactions with respect to others.
Reaction to people who are smarted than he is:
After evaluating that a certain person's intelligence is beyond his, he acknowledges that person as his mental superior instead of being an impudent, retarded upstart. He greatly respects those who know more than he does, and often will follow them to learn more. When his opponent is the more intelligent, he will go on the complete defensive, hoping to God that he's not playing into his opponent's plan.
Reaction to people who are stronger than he is:
When he realizes that someone is significantly stronger than he is, he will switch to a more cautious mode. His instinct of self-preservation kicks in when he sees such as person, and he will try to avoid a direct confrontation. For example, if he was faced with someone like Yammy in released mode, he would either run away or, if not able to flee, would try to survive as long as possible while carefully observing his opponent.
Reaction to people who annoy him:

If someone does annoy him (not probable) he will try to kill them if possible or acceptable for the situation. If not, he will try to stop the source of annoyance (i.e. cutting out the offender's toungue). However, Takazashi is annoyed only in extreme cases. Razz

He still remains respectful of the Gotei 13 and the Captain Commander, although he is deathly afraid of him. He is generally cautious, polite, respectful and analytic.

Likes: Lightning, blood, contrasts, irony, food
Dislikes:Hunger, pain, prosaic art, humans, shinigami
Fears:The captain-commander
Hopes/Dreams:Hopes to be free/dreams of an ocean
Sexual Orientation:Hetero
Relationship Status:None
History: The reason that Takazashi wanted to become a shinigami was mainly to escape boredom. After all, life in the rukongai was quite difficult, to say the least. But first, he had to go through that stupid academy. The academy years were probably the most downright boring in his life. However, near the end of those years, he learned of something important: kido. With demon arts, he could potentially do the impossible. However, he passed this to the back of his mind. He graduated with high marks from the academy and attracted the attention of the 12th division. Here, he killed hollows, took tissue samples from the hollows, and bred illegal experiments in secret. Eventually, these led to him finding Kurokon Shikyo, who hollowfied him. As a result of all this illegality, he simply left the Seiretei and made his way to the World of the Living. Here, he settles down as the biology teacher of Karakura High School.
RP Sample:[img][/img] (Teaching in Karakura Town): As he got up from his seat, he sighed. The classroom was full of expectant children, waiting for the signal. Such hormone-filled fleshbags. He knit his eyebrows; maybe he could harvest hormones out of them! He shook his head, clearing the unethical thoughts from his mind. He cleared his throat loudly, and said, "Class dissmissed." Immediately, the delinquent high-schoolers cheered, and rushed out of the room, chattering excitedly.
Later on, he went hollow hunting. He suddenly heard a rip and out of the sky came a smaller adjuchas hollow, which had somehow evolved the ability to fall long distances without being smashed on concrete. However, he also fell on top of Professor Harakiri's arm, breaking it. Crying out in pain and frustration, Takazashi activated his hollow mask and regenerated his arm. The hollow was surprised. "How in protestant blood-soaked hell did you do that?" he cried. Takazashi smirked. "Fuck you, that's how." He then proceeded to cero the hollow into oblivion. He walked home, whistling "Do you Believe in Magic".


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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Mon Apr 15, 2013 2:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Apr 17, 2013 11:58 am

Pretty much, more detail on everything, explain how your powers work, why they work, and more detail on what they do, rather than a single sentence.
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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Apr 17, 2013 12:48 pm

Made some modifications, some of my stuff was already pretty detailed and added speed of attacks as well as domination details.
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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Apr 17, 2013 5:03 pm

Name:Reiatsu Domination
Type:-
Range: 5 m
Description:
Can completely control the mind of any human with a reiatsu stat of 55 or less within the 5m range who is not spiritually awakened. This works, because, through the oppression of the victim's reiatsu, the user is able to manipulate his mind by poking his subconscious repeatedly.

Name:Soul Consumption
Type:Hollow
Range:5 m
Description:With his hollow mask on, Takazashi can consume the soul of any unconscious or sleeping being withing 5 meters. This process lets him examine the memories of the victim. Because a sleeping victim leaves his/her subconscious (and thus, his/her ambient reiatsu) unguarded, Takazashi can easily consume it. This is similar to Gonzui.

Name:Hollow Domination
Type:Hollow
Range:10 m
Description:Takazashi may control the mind of any hollow that is not an arrancar. The range of control is 10 m. Description: see Reiatsu Domination above

Name:Iki hibana no chōken: Transcend
Type:Lightning, passive
Range:sword
Description:The sword appears to erase all matter or rei-based defense it touches. It de-condenses the matter into its pure energy form and dissipates it, which results in the shimmering of the bankai.

"All Bankai moves move at 1.5x the user's speed."


No. Just no, remove em.

Name:Kaminari no kēji
Type:Lightning
Range:15 m
Description:A stationary cage of lighning that can surround one person. Can only have one at a time. The person of equal power would take severe burns and damage by moving through the cage. The size of the cage changes with the victim's size. 2 post cooldown and 2 post duration. Forms spontaneously around the victim. More and less powerful: see Kaminari no nami


It could not just magically form around the person, change that.

As for the rest, add DETAIL
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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Mon Jun 10, 2013 2:53 pm

I already had permission from some of the other mods to include some of those powers, so I kept them and modified some.

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Mon Jul 08, 2013 11:08 am

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Sun Oct 27, 2013 8:43 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takazashi Harakiri {DONE}   Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:36 pm

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